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This week, we have written some paragraphs focusing on Topic Sentence, Supporting Ideas together with details and examples, and Concluding Sentence.
Your paragraphs are getting better and better:)
Topics are given to you. You need to norrow down one of the topics to make a topic sentence. Then write a paragraph referring to your outline. Do remember to use the checklist to edit your sentences.
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Find the mistakes about unity and coherence in the second paragraph. complete the blanks with an approppriate connector and find the 3 off-topic sentences.
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Choose two of the topic sentences and write outlines and paragraphs. Remember to use the editing checlist.
a- Pollution is one of the biggest problems in the world today.
b-Making friends is the best way to get used to somewhere new.
c- There are many causes of animal excinction,
d- Many young people enjoy playing a variety of computer games.
e- People can learn many things from owning a pet.
Good luck:)
There are some types of bayrams celebrated in Turkey.Firstly, one of these bayrams is religious bayrams.Religious bayrams are celebrated because of religious purpose.There are 2 types of religious bayrams in Islam.One of these bayrams is Ramadan Bayram.After the Ramadan month which is called sultan of 11 months by Muslims ends, it is celebrated by Muslims.An another religious bayram is Sacrifice Bayram.Some Muslims which afford to buy a sacrificial animal victimize a sacrificial animal at this bayram due to religious beliefs.After they victimize, they distribute some parts of their meats to people who don't afford to buy a sacrificial animal.Secondly, national bayrams are celebrated in Turkey.In these bayrams people do some activities.These activities are folk dances and parades.There are 4 types of national bayrams in Turkey.There are Republic,Children,Independence,and Youth Bayram.Finally, people who aren't Muslim celebrate some bayrams.They celebrate because of religion.These bayrams are Halloween,Christmas, and Eastern.To sum up, religious bayrams,national bayrams,and other bayrams which is celebrated with non-Muslim are celebrated in Turkey.
YanıtlaSilEnes ŞAHİN
There are 2 kinds of bayrams.First of all, national bayrams create national emotions in our mind.There are excellent shows by military with airplane.People march in the Street for something.For example, republic marchs,indepence marchs etc.National bayrams symbolize national union.secondly, there are religious bayrams. Religious bayrams create religious emotions in our mind. These bayrams improve relationship with family and other people,so people are happy because of events in bayrams. For example, grandparents are happy when you visit them, and children are happy when take a desserts. Religious bayrams symbolize help and solidarity.All in all we have 2 types of bayrams called national bayrams and religious bayrams.
YanıtlaSilThere are some types of bayrams celebrated in Turkey.Firsly,there are two religious bayrams.They are Ramadan and Sacrifice.Their goals are increasing both social communication and respect ,helping to poor people.Accordingly ,people visit own relative ,and children kiss old humans’ hands.The old people give money to the children ;besides,the children become happy.There is only one difference Sacrifice ,and Ramadan Bayrams. This is sacrifising some animals.For example ,these animals are cow,calf ,and sheep.They must ruminote . This is important point to Sacrifice.
YanıtlaSilThe Turkish have some types of national bayrams in Turkey;moreover,they are Republic,Children ,Independence ,and Youth Bayram.Their purpose is releasing national emotion;therefore,the people who live in Turkey organise some activities.For instance,everyone sing The Turkish National Anthem;besides, bith soldiers and public parade.The people hang a lot of Turkish flags in the street.National bayrams are important point for The Turkish.In short,the public celeberate these bayrams in cheer way.
There are other important bayrams in Turkey.They are Christmas ,Hallowen ,and Eastern.Firstly ,Christians celebrate Eastern Day.The people paint a lot of eggs differently.Secondly ,they celebrate Hallowen Bayram. Children wear scary clothes ,and knock a large number of doors. The homeowners give some sugar,fruits ,and other presents to the children.Thirdly,one of the important days is Christmas.Christmas is the first day of the new year.This day is celebrated around the world.The Turkish play bingo.They visit own relatives .They have a good time.
To sum up,there are some bayrams celebrated funnily .
Plenty of bayrams are celebrated in Turkey.There are religious bayrams, national bayrams, other bayrams.Firstly, religious bayrams are Ramadan,Sacrifice.Müslims don't eat during day in one month called Ramadan.The end of Ramadan month people celebrate bayram and it continue three days.Young people go to visit to old people.Besides, children kiss old people's hands after that old people give money or sugar and chocolate;furthermore, desserts are served to people who come to visit.Consequently, called Sugar Bayram.A ship , a cow , an aries are cutted by people and people present to god in religious ceremony.The goal is gifting meat to people who don't have money.Secondly, national bayrams are 19 May Youth and Sport Bayram , 23 April National Savereignty and Child Bayram , 30 August Victory Bayram , and 29 October Republic Bayram.Atatürk started to national struggle on 19 May.On 23 April Turkey Huge National Council was founded by Atatürk and Atatürk presented to world children.Turks won against the enemys in Atatürk's leadership on 30 August.Finally, on 29 Oct. set up Republic.Thirdly , other bayrams are celebrated by gayrimüslim.For example, Hallowen, Christmas, Eastern.To sum up , in Turkey people celebrate many bayrams.
YanıtlaSilThere are two religious holidays that we celebrate in our country which are called Kurban and Ramadan. And there are so many different traditions we are trying to maintain in this times of year.First of all,there is a desert which is called baklava that we may eat very in these days and I can say that this may be my favourite tradition.People serve this dessert to their guests then they eat it together while they are chatting.Secondly, there is also very important tradition which is visiting relatives.Peole go and visit their relatives that they can't see very often, families, reunite in these times of year.Grandparents usually love this tradition because of this tradition,so this tradition has a profound impact an them to feel happy.
YanıtlaSilThere are many types of bayrams celebrated in Turkey. Firstly, we celebrate two religious holidays in Turkey which are Ramadan and Sacrifise Holidays. Secondly, we have four national holidays. These are Republic, Children, Independence, and Youth Holidays. We celebrate these holidays all together in Turkey. We join parade; also, there are many folk dance shows. Thirdly, Turkey has a lot of foreign people; thus, they celebrate their traditional holidays. We can say Hallowen, Christmas, and Eastern as examples. They wear scary costums in Hallowen; also, they distribute colorful eggs in Eastern Holiday. Foreign people celebrate these bayrams; however, we've been joining these celebrations lately. To sum up, we celebrate many bayrams in Turkey.
YanıtlaSil