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1- In what ways can technology help the environment?
2- Do you think people in Turkey do a good job of protecting the environment?
3- How are American food and Turkish food different from each other?
4- What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today?
YanıtlaSilWhat is the very important skill a person should learn in the world today, different people have differnt opinions. Therefor, communication is the most impotant skill for almost every person..
Firstly, communication is a bridge between people. We all hope we can be become the person who masters every skills and can complete every kind work by ourselves. However the real world tells us that this just is a dream. Consequently, people are interdependant, they can’t say that they does not need other people's help. Communication is the first step of successful cooperation among people. Also we exchange of thoughts and information, and get other people understand our needs and ideas.
Moreover, communication can help us keep friendship and make new friends. Friends need to
communicate to each other, so that they know each other's needs and feelings. If you are a good
communicator, it is very easy for you to keep your friendship and make new friends and be successful. If you do not communicate with your friends, you will not only feel lonely, but also can yet loss your friends.
What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the World today?
YanıtlaSilPeople should be open to learn a lot of knowledge and skills that will be useful one day.In my opinion, the most important skill is being able to speak a few languages that are important.If you are speaking several languages,it gives you opportunity to have good job with a high salary and have a lot of friends all over the world .
To begin with,especially English will give you opportunity to obtain a good job in my country.There are a lot of private enterprises that give high salaries for their employees and require workers who know English fluently.If you have a higher education and can speak in the English language, you can earn money and take care for the welfare of your family.You can go to on vacations to the foreign countries with your family and have a good relaxing time if you have a high salary.Until you have a good job and high salary , you can only spend your vacation in the town where you live.
Secondly, speaking several languages allows you to communicate with people in the different countries. When people can speak several languages, they communicate easily with inhabitants of foreign countries when they travel and find friends for themselves.
In summary, there are a lot of skills we should learn and some people have different preferences according to their life experiences and personal interests. However, I think that in our globalized world, speaking in many languages is the most important for connecting people because the connection between people is very important for the continuation of the world.
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Hi Veysel!
SilI am so impressed:)
2- Do you think people in Turkey do a good job of protecting the environment?
YanıtlaSilTurkish people are like many people in the world.These people aren't doing good things for environment.Besides,They are doing bad things for environment.Therefore,the natural life is both polluting and disappearing day by day.
For example,when some people in Turkey go to forest for barbecue,they may forget to extinguish the fire.Thus,our forests are burning,and the number of our forests is discreasing day by day.Although it is discreasing,these people who do bad things for enviromet don't mind this situation.Another example,while many people in Turkey are going to work,they aren't using public service vehicle.Therefore,air pollution is increasing.On the other hand,some people in Turkey is doing good things for environment.They are planting trees,and they usually use public service vehicle since they are aware that we need to environment for continuing our lifes.However,there are a little environmentalist in Turkey.Furtherrmore,the number of environmentalist isn't increasing.
As a result of that people who do bad things for environment should be environmentalist.Otherwise,the environment will disappear all.
Hi Enes,
SilUnfortunately men are the main threat:(((
What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the World today?
YanıtlaSilPeople has different opinions for what is the very important skill a person should learn in the world today and I have different ideas about this subject.
Firstly, if you connect other people during the day, you have to have good communication. You talk about everything with your work friends; hence, you should express yourself correctly. If you speak fascinating, you can affect others. Thus, you improve yourself easily.
Secondly, you should learn foreign languages. I think English is the most important language in the world because many people from other countries can speak English well. If you speak English, you can work different jobs and position. However, if you speak different languages such as Chinese, Russian, Italien, you will be different others. Also, you will have better position and higher salary.
What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the World today?
YanıtlaSilI think. the most important skill is comminucation, so your conversation with the others is very important for your success.If you make angry to somebody, nobody doesn't like you. If you make happy to somebody, everybody likes you.Although you don't love somebody, you should show good behaviour. There are many ways to make happy to somebody. We can order some examples as follows:
-look eyes to opposite of you while it is talking.
-use some good words as please,thanks etc.
-Don't talk a lot, because it can be boring.
-Don't predict to subject after you didn't listen somethnig about subject.
-shake hands in the begining and the end.
If you obey this roles, you will be able to success.
Do you think people in Turkey do a good job of protecting the environment?
YanıtlaSilTurkish goverment has killed forest many years.Municipalities have built many shopping centre in forests.They have built windowists ,plazas and skyscrapers.They have breaked down parks and killed children’s playgrounds.Turkish people did not be unresponsive about it.They touhgt to the streets and saved their trees in Gezi Park.Non-govermental organizations, students, teachers, enviromentalists saved their future.They have not allowed slaught and concretisation.
People are not allow breaking down parks and killing forest, but municipalities cannot understand reactions.For example Uskudar Municipality.Mayor want to murder Validebag Grove but people will not allow it.Students and NGO’s are making actions now.Police has attacked them, in spite of they have not given up action.Validebag can save however people can support theirself.Youth and conscious peoples want to better Turkey and they do good jobs to their country and their future.
"Never give up" is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the World today.
YanıtlaSilWe make mistakes sometimes. We never make it which we always do true things. This is normal. Important thing which we should take lessons from our mistakes and never give up , because we can be successful by this way. We should look our future with hope. If we want a thing , we should try to do it. If we need , we should try too for successful. We can't success first time , but we should never give up , believe it which we can do. We should trust ourselves.
Edison invented bulb. Edison couldn't invent bulb first time , but he never gave up. He tried to invent bulb 2000 times He successed. This is very important example for us . Even though Edison lived in the past , his skill still be effective in today for success.
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YanıtlaSilEnvironment is very important for our world. İt provides oxygen; moreover, it is necessary for animals. We should respect and protect the environment. İn Turkey people do not do a good job of protecting environment; therefore, the number of wild animals, green places is decreasing. I hope this situation will change; otherwise, it won't be a beautiful world for our children
YanıtlaSilDo you think people in Turkey do a good job of protecting the environment?
YanıtlaSilTurkey has a spectacular environment. We don't protect the environment enough although we have this country. We have a good location in the world, so we have wonderful nature. Unless we protect the environment, the next generation will not see this nature; therefore, we should do good job.
I think we haven't protected the environment recently. Last year the government cutted trees in gezi park. When the government started to cut trees, the people didn't give permission because they wanted to protect the environment. They protested this event.
Finally, you reap what you sow. If we protect the environment, we have a good nature.
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YanıtlaSilIn what ways can technology help the environment:
YanıtlaSilI think the technology can help us about environmental projects for example plating big trees. We haven't got enough fresh air in big cities because there aren't enough big trees around us. We should plant trees before fresh air over. Although many people know that, just a few people do something about that. Unless we start to protect environment, there won't be any environment which we should protect. I think there won't be any big step about that until we show important of environment to people.
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Do you think people in Turkey do a good job of protecting the environment?
YanıtlaSilNowadays there is rarely people who is trying to protect the environment in Turkey.For example in our country most people see our seas as a dump by the way they don't blame themselves for the pollution.Factories don't take measures to prevent the pollution.Because of the reasons that i have mentioned i think people in Turkey don't do a good job of protecting the environment.If people don't care,pollution will increase.
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Do you think people in Turkey do a good job of protecting the environment?
YanıtlaSilEnvironment has both alive and lifeless creature.Environment is home home for alive.Alives are people,animals an plants.The most important of alives is people because people damage the environment or protect environment.They affect not only change of climate but also life of other alives.
They have not understood importance of environment .Therefore,people built skyscraper in everywhere.They mind neither animals nor plants lives. Actually people do not mind own lives. They cut the trees to built apartment block;nevertheless,trees produce an oxgen .Alives need the oxgen to live.A company just want to save money.It is wrong.
People use parfumes.Parfuöes include aerosol gas.Aerosol gas causes the global warming .This gas causes hole in the ozone layer.Thus,climate is changing.For example ,Trabzon had mild climate;however it has terrestrial climate anymore.This change affect life of alive.
Hunters catch the extint animals although the number of animals is decreasing consequently.Therefore, balance of nature is destroying significantly.
However,some people prevent this event .They protest against for protect the environment.Environmentalists organize to protect the trees .They want both to plant a trees and beautify the the nature.Although,environmentalists strive protect the environment , some people do not mind it.
Censequently,some people is sensitive , some people is reckless to protect the environment.
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What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the World today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
YanıtlaSilIn my opinion "thinking different" is most important skill. If you imagine somethings different and carry out them, you can be successful in the World.
For instance, Mark Zuckerberg has developed FaceBook that is social network. This website became populer in a short time worldwide because of a original and different idea.
For example, Sergey M. Brin and Lawrence E. Page has established Google INC. They create a search engine that is most populer website now. Although it is a very hard work, they never gave up and realized their dreams.
As a result, when something is wrong and you can't fix it, you should change your perspective and think different.
How are the American food and Turkish food different from each other ?
YanıtlaSilI think American food and Turkish food are different from because of many reasons.
First reason is that Usa and Turkey have different climates.Example, olive grow up in Turkey but does not grow up in Usa.So Turkish foods contain olive oil but American foods contains various sauces.
Second reason is different cultures.American foods include pork but Turkish foods have not this.Furthermore, Americans eat horse meat but Turkish do not eat it for they are not addiction eating horse meat.
Other reason is preferences of people.People in the USA prefer fast food according to eating food in home.If you continue to eat fast food , you may have healht problems in the future because fast food is unhealhty.People in Turkey always choose to eat food in home although fast food restaurants are popular in Turkey.Morever they prefer pide and lahmacun like Turkish foods .Their taste is different from fast food alsa they is not unhealthy.So Turkish are healthier than Americans.
Finally, Turkish and American foods are different because of different cultures, climates, preferences and a lot of things.
What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the World today?
YanıtlaSilWe, the peole are quite curious creaters. We are able to imagine besides asking the questions about nature. Finally, we began to invent and thinking about universe. İt has developed during our evolution. İn our day, technology has been progressing and we have been understanding the universe, the galaxies and the earth. At the same time we have acquired knowledge about ourselves. Now, we know where we come from, how we are formed and our evolutionary steps.
Communication is the most important thing for us. We should share to knowledge with creative people and develop a crytical analysis. We have new opportunities and resources thanks to information which is the most valuable thing. İf we want to analyze them, we should improve intellectual skills. İntellectual skills refer to synthesizing and problem-solving skills.they include the both assimilation and application of new knowledge. When we learn with new information, we can improve intellectual skills by asking the following question: how might that be tue? This simple question will open your curiosity; thus, you are more successful.
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How are American food and Turkish food different from each other?
YanıtlaSilTurkish food and American food are different from each other as their ingredients are really dissimilar. Turkey's location is very important in this situation. Our country is extremely lucky because of cultural exchange. Turkish cuisine affected both the Balkan and Middle East culture ;also, Turkish cuisine was influenced by them. It varies according to region.(For example Mediterranean cuisine, Black Sea cuisine...) As an Aegean person, my favourite is "zeytinyağlı enginar"
Although the American was not lucky until they met with us, American Food contains many strange things. For example, we don't use pork meat as it is forbidden in our culture. American food is based on fast-food and fast-food was become widespread in Turkey too. Even though fast-food is unhealty, pizza and hamburger are liked in common and this is why obesite is getting a big problem for us. If we need to give another example, unfortunetely I have tasted doughnut for the first time and I was surprised since it is a fatty and overly sweet food.
As a result, I don't like the American food and don't choose it unless I am obligated to eat something. I think we have a cuisine which is rich in taste and our food is much healthier.
Do you think people in Turkey do a good job of protecting the environment?
YanıtlaSilPeople in Turkey are insensitive for the environment.Less people want to somethıng for the environment and fewer do it.people not only litter but also damage te trees and flowers. For instence we must throw the trash to the garbage.It is not difficult , however; people ın Turkey thınk that ıt doesnt matter more person.They don't care.
If we start do somethıng, people will be carefull.Our environment may be better like other countries.
I think we can make products better recylable and use less energy so that the streets can be more become liveable.
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How are American food and Turkish food different from each other?
YanıtlaSilAmerica has not traditional food as Turkey. They use to have fast food in America but in Turkey is different situation. Foods are very various in Turkey. Turkish foods are famous and traditional. Tourists who are coming to Turkey for visit like very much Turkish food especially kebaps. Meats and vegetables are cooking and serving in the same plate in Turkey. Also desserts are very famous in Turkey especially baklava
What is very important skill a person shoulder learn in order to be successful in the worldwide today ?
YanıtlaSilLife is like a game.You can win, or you can lose.If you want to be successful in this life, you should be determined .
People always want to be more successful, also they want to on top.However, this is not easy.For example, students should study regularly in their education life if they want to finish their schools with good grades.It depends their effort and determination . At the same time an employee wants to getting promotion;thus, he/she should focus on his/her goals.They will always stick up to problems.
You can deal with your problems if you are determined.Determined people never give up and always move on ; therefore, you should have this skill.